No Bad Deed – A Short Story

Greetings friends and readers. As promised, what follows is a short story I wrote sometime back. As you’ll note, the story has an introduction that may sound familiar to some. A closer inspection will reveal from whence the inspiration for this story came. If you can guess it, please leave a comment. I’ll let you know in a future post who was right 🙂

Anywho, without further adieu, here is No Bad Deed

 

Sitting at the table, top hat in hand and linen bag by his feet, is Mr. Fineus T Barlow.

It is 1865, and a terrible Civil War has just ended.

Mister Barlow and compatriot are sitting ‘round and discussing financial opportunities presented by the end of the terrible and destructive war.

Mister Barlow is a salesman, though his goods-in-trade are not made of wood, metal, leather, or cloth. Mister Barlow trades in lies, scams, and broken dreams, making a living off those who are too poor, depressed, or downtrodden to see exactly what a poor salesman Mister Barlow actually is.

Like most of his ilk, Mr. Barlow believes he’s checked his conscience at the door.

But he’ll soon find that the little voice cannot be silenced utterly. And that all things do not stay equal.

 NO BAD DEED…

 

 

 

 

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Where There’s a Whip…

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Procrastination

Hello freinds!

Well, I know I promised a big reveal today, however I’m afraid a slight delay has come up, so I’ll have to put it off until tomorrow.

Sorry. Tomorrow, I promise! 🙂

Anywho, there’ll be a new short on Tales of Aeonith, so there’s that.

Until tomorrow, thanks for reading!

 

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Amazon/Hachette Truce Declared

Well finally the great publishing Debacle of 2014 is over. Amazon and giant publisher Hachette have come to an agreement.Naturally terms of that agreement have not been disclosed, nor what other schenaigans went on behind the scenes. Most of all, I’m glad it’s over. In my opinion, it was giving the whole world of publishing a black eye.

I’d say things can finally go back to normal, but what is the norm in publishing these days? The entire industry is still in a great state of flux as it deals with all kinds of new pressures and problems brought on by the Digital Publishing Age.

But as long as their are people who want to write, and people who want to read, there will be publishing. Of that, we can be sure.

 

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A Preview of Things to Come

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Ladies and Gentleman,  introducing a character from one of my latest works. I’ll leave the details for an upcoming post.  As I scrub and polish this latest manuscript, I had to share at least a few paragraphs of this fascinating tale.

Unlike my most of my previous works, this tale is set on Earth, in the distant future. Mankind has lost control of his world, having lost that control to a a race of vampires disaffectionately known as the Lamians. Into this eternal night rides our heroine, Shyene Lucas.

What follows in an excerpt from said story, tentatively entitled “Blood Marriage.”

 


 

Shy gunned the engine faster. Steam shot from wide pipes that jutted from the sides of the bike, leaving a white trail like a perfectly straight serpent.
The castle loomed large as the afternoon waned. It seemed empty, devoid of any life at all. The stone was old, cracks so large she could see them at a far distance. The castle’s battlements were empty, no guards in the corner watchtowers. Though Baron Coldmiir was supposedly in hiding from his fellow Lamians, he couldn’t be too worried about being discovered.
Unless of course the guards only came out at night.
Shy was considering this fact as she neared the castle. The old drawbridge was down, open in invitation. The immense, rusty chains attached to the ancient wood were so worn they might have been incapable of raising the broad wooden plank that spanned a long-dry moat.
Shy suddenly put on the brakes, stopping her ride just feet before the bridge. Standing squarely in its center was Zorak Sharn, the vampire’s henchman/bodyguard.
The bike roared once, twice, shouting a challenge to the daunting cyborg. He stood his ground quietly.
At last Shy quieted the machine, stepping boldly off. Her hands went subtly to her hips.

“Greetings.” Zorak’s voice was odd, mechanical yet smooth, with a definite human quality.

Shyene merely nodded.

“Baron Vlen Coldmiir welcomes you to his domain, and his residence. He bids me to accompany you inside. We shall wait there for his arrival, soon after sundown.”

Shyene smiled now.

“Ahh, thanks, but I think I’ll find my own way. Besides, if it’s all the same you, I think I’d rather see him before the sun goes down.”

His human half was easy to read; she was certain he’d grinned at her proposal. His metal half seemed to try it, managing only a strange grimace that made it seem more like pain than amusement.

“I’m afraid I cannot allow that.”

Shy’s fingers were touching the double-ended daggers attached firmly to each hip.

“Sorry to hear that.”

A silvery-white flash sailed toward Zorak. The whirling dagger suddenly bounced away as it neared his neck.
His human right hand held a sword now, procured from the scabbard on his back. Shy had seen the hilt jutting from behind his head, but believed it was little more than an affectation, really. With the death ray in his palm, what would he need with a longsword?
She had just found out.
Her dagger, with a blade sticking out of both ends of the hilt, landed several yards away. Zorak stood still, sword in hand, as if nothing had happened at all.
Shyene smiled. Extending her left hand, Shy flicked a certain nerve in her wrist. This activated a magnet within her glove. The field was tuned to a specific magnetic frequency, one that her weapon alone was attuned too. This way, only the dagger would be affected by the powerful magnet, and it flew back to Shyene’s waiting hand in an instant.
She couldn’t be sure, but she thought the cyborg’s human eyebrow moved.

“Nothin’ against you, Zorak,” Shy began, “but I’m going to get in there. No need to get killed on my account. Just stand aside.”

Zorak shook his head no.

“The baron’s orders were explicit. Stay with you at all times until he arrives.”

Shyene sighed, head hanging for a moment. The opening shot had just been a warning.

“Okay then.”

Two silver lights now raced toward Zorak at exactly the same speed and trajectory. Though it should have been impossible for him to have deflected both of them, he somehow managed to send both of them flying into the air.
It didn’t matter; the move had been a distraction anyway. In the second it took Zorak to defend himself from Shy’s daggers, she’d closed half the distance between them. The deadly weapons returned to her hands as she shot forward, returning to her grip just as she leapt high above the surprised cyborg.
Shy came down hard, intending to drive one of the daggers into his metal skull.

But he’d already stepped back too far.

 


Well I hope you enjoyed that little piece, there’ll be more to follow.

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Fall has Begun

Autumn is upon us, my friends. And with that comes the new TV season. Now, I’m not usually excited about this, for years now there haven’t been that many new shows that got my attention. My favorite genres have tended to get pushed aside in favor of more reality shows. And they just weren’t my thing.

Enter this fall and things have changed. Last night the new show Gotham premiered, about the very same Gotham City Batman will roam in some years later. And after that, we begin the second season of Sleepy Hollow, a modern-day retelling of the classic story.

Gotham was awesome, I thought, right out of the gate. The mood and characters were really established, and it has the makings of being a great show throughout. Right off the bat, we see how Gotham is a corrupt city. A crook takes a cop’s gun, and when said criminal is finally relieved of the weapon, the Gotham PD proceeds to beat the guy. We meet some of the future villains, Osward Cobblepot(Penguin) is working for a criminal, Ed Nygma(Riddler) is some kind of tech consultant for the police. And Salina Kyle(Catwoman) just follows a young Bruce Wayne around. One guy they didn’t mention was the Joker, but there was this one scene. There’s this comedian doing an audition for Fish Mooney, a major criminal; Mooney owns a nightclub. Well, right in the middle of this guy’s act Mooney starts yelling and beating someone, right in front of him. The comedian looks terrified. Anyway, the scene ends and you never see the guy again, but I’m keeping an eye on that. A comedian trying to get a job in a crook’s bar, witnessing brutality, yea I’m keeping an eye on that.

Sleepy Hollow was good too. They pick up right where they left off last season, but I’ll leave that out in case you haven’t seen the show yet. They throw you a curve at the beginning, but stay with them and it gets back on track. Later on, we get Shirtless Horseman. I just said wow, okay. Headless Horseman changing clothes. Alrighty then.

I personally am glad to see more adventure shows coming back, and superhero shows at that. Gotham, plus next week starts Arrow Season 3, the new The Flash series, and tonight begins Agents of Shield season 2. Guess I’m going to get less writing done, but it was time for a break anyway. 🙂

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from Falls a Dark Shadow

Hey all. How about a little something from Falls a Dark Shadow: Arcania Rising? Enjoy, and gave a great weekend.

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Caerish leaned in to Lenar as the group neared the outpost. Tynaul heard the lord whispering to the nervous young man.

“Just keep calm, my friend. Everything will be fine.”

Tynaul could just see the young man’s face turning white as they approached the guards at the entrance to the outpost. Tynaul felt a sharp prick in his back, reminding him that Kint was just a push away from ending his life should he deviate from the plan. Tynaul began to summon the power he’d called upon the night before in his meditation.

The guards viewed the newcomers with a mix of acknowledgment and suspicion. Obviously, they wouldn’t know any of them, but these men were wearing Arcanian uniforms, and in a camp of a thousand men, it was only natural to forget some faces. The guards lowered spears as the group approached.

“Who goes there?”

“Name’s Cavendish, you big ox.” Caerish shouted. “We were out on patrol and caught us a rebel spy. Brought him right back here straight away, we did. Now let us in, we’re tired and we want to get rid of this baggage and put our feet up.”

Suddenly a larger man in a more elaborate set of armor appeared from behind the gate. Tynaul knew Sargeant Graitis on sight, and his entire plan hinged on Graitis recognizing him as well. Tynaul called on his power as Graitis approached the group. Tynaul leaned back and touched the tip of Kint’s sword, quietly uttering the arcane words of a paralyzing spell.

Graitis stood in front of Caerish, a suspicious scowl on his face.

“So where did you capture this fool, anyway? Was he by himself?”

Caerish was about to respond to Graitis in the answers he’d prepared, when the sergeant’s attention was suddenly torn away.  Caerish heard footsteps behind him. A familiar young voice called out in a firm authority, to which Caerish merely closed his eyes in acquiescence.

Poor Lenar was practically shaking in fear.

Tynaul pushed past the startled lord and the terrified young man, rubbing his wrists where the ropes were now falling off his arms. Tynaul stood in front of Graitis just long enough for the sergeant to begin to comprehend just who he was and what was going on.

“Sargeant Graitis, I know you remember me, but let’s just make this official. I am Commander Tynaul Lysis. By His Imperial Majesty’s order I hereby take command of this outpost.” Tynaul took a step forward, looking the tall, brusque sergeant straight in the eye, and saw exactly the moment when Graitis understood the truth. Graitis took a step back, bowed slightly, and then saluted his superior officer in the cross-shoulder Arcanian way.

“These men behind me are the rebel leaders.” Tynaul continued. “Take them into custody immediately. You.” Tynaul pointed to the guard on Graitis’ left side. “Take me to the quartermaster, then to the command tent. Immediately.”

A long, anxious hush fell over the company for a moment as the situation sank in to each and every person present. Suddenly Graitis looked around at his men in frustration.

“Well, don’t just stand there like dung-piles,” he yelled, “get moving!”

More guards appeared from behind the massive sergeant holding chains and manacles. They quickly stripped all three of the stunned men behind Tynaul of their weapons. The scarred one in the back gave them trouble, as he seemed to be refusing to move at all. They had to force his hands behind him at last.

Tynaul turned one last time to look at Caerish and the other two before entering the camp. Kint’s hatred was readily apparent, as was Lenar’s extreme terror. Lord Caerish seemed completely untroubled. His eyes locked onto Tynaul, who was suddenly unable to look back at him. Tynaul turned into the outpost, unable to shake Caerish’s tranquil gaze from his mind.

 

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An excerpt

Today dear friends and readers, I thought I’d share a little bit of a work in progress. It’s just a little scene from a much larger picture, but it’s nice and vivid. Enjoy!

 

A jolt of ice shivered down his back. His instincts told him he should go; his curiosity, and his orders, willed him where he was. Lying face down across a flat rock overlooking a green hillside.

His quarry was easy to spot; a figure in black armor moving slowly across an emerald backdrop. The halberd it easily carried in one hand gleamed in the sun.

As he, or she, disappeared around the hill, Edwylde moved carefully off the rock, stalking his prey. Near the top of the hillock, he fell again onto his stomach and crawled up to the crest.

Peering over the hill, flat greenlands spread out before him, turning to yellow in the distance; probably a farmer’s ripe cornfield.

Edwylde held his breath. There was no sign of the figure in dark armor. The stark fields were bare of any movement at all.

Raising his head ever so slightly, the ranger cast his gaze across the landscape. Nothing. There was no sign of the black intruder anywhere.

Suddenly his instincts lit up again, telling him to move sideways. Ed listened this time, saving his life.

The bladed axe of the halberd surely would have cut him in two had he not moved at that exact second. On his feet the next, Edwylde barely had time to draw his sword before another blow came slicing downward.

His opponent moved incredibly fast for someone in such a heavy outfit. The dark figure moved as though he wearing nothing at all.

The black knight’s weapon whistled in the air like nothing Edwylde had ever heard, it almost seemed to hum. His foe’s attacks came fast, almost too fast for Ed to dodge, much less block. For the moment, all he could do was retreat.

At last, his opponent swung wild, too wild, the attack far overreaching and leaving the dark figure vulnerable. Ed swung with all his might at black warrior’s midsection.

He might as well have been hitting a stone wall.

Edwylde’s blade bounced off the dark knight’s armor, leaving not so much as a scratch. The sword flew from his hand from the vibrations, landing too far away for Ed to have any hope of getting it back.

His foe was upon him again, forcing Edwylde to retreat further. With no weapon and no way of getting another, Ed made the only sensible choice. Run. At least he was sure he could outrun a man(or woman) outfitted in solid plate-mail.

Or so he thought.

Edwylde broke out into a solid run. He was fast as the wind in his light green leather, his feet as sure and quick in his tall-boots as any rabbit. After thirty or forty yards, Ed looked back, and ducked just in time to keep his head on his shoulders.

The dark knight was right behind him.

Ed heard the halberd whirl again, slicing the wind where he’d been an instant earlier. The young ranger’s courage began to wane. If he couldn’t outrun this foe…

Then perhaps he could hide. Hope rose again in the young man’s breast. A small copse of trees appeared ahead. If he could make it that far, he might have a chance. Surely this tin can couldn’t climb in that outfit.

Ed never made the mistake of looking back again; he could hear the dark knight’s footsteps right behind him.

The trees came closer. Only twenty more yards.

Ten yards ahead.

Suddenly Ed was running between the trees, looking for the biggest and tallest. He found it soon, breaking suddenly to his right. As if sensing what the young man was going to do, the black knight stayed right behind him, not missing a step.

Edwylde jumped just as the halberd swung again. He’d have screamed had he seen just how close he came to losing his foot. Like a cat, Ed shot up the tree in seconds, at last leaving his opponent behind.

Still, he didn’t look down until he was good thirty or so feet up.

Ed smiled as he saw the black knight pacing beneath him. My turn.

Edwylde’s bow was suddenly in his hand, arrow nocked and ready. The knight stopped, and Ed shot. His eyes had never gone wider.

The arrow merely bounced off the knight’s armor. Impossible. He’d put an arrow through three boards with that bow, and no telling how many suits of armor. Even the best steel-plates hadn’t stood up to his weapon.

Ed fired again, and again. Each arrow hit the mark exactly, and should have stuck inside the black warrior’s head. Instead they simply bounced off, his third arrow actually shattering into a thousand shards of wood. His bravery again began to fade. Options were narrower now.

Suddenly things got worse.

The tree shook mightily, as though a giant had kicked it. Ed looked down to see the dark knight swing his halberd into the trunk, like a black-mailed lumberjack.

The axe-head of the halberd bit hard into the tree. Whomever was in that mail had to be incredibly strong. The dark figure jerked his weapon out, pulled back, and swung again. The tree shook like an earthquake; Ed nearly lost his balance.

The nimble ranger climbed higher as the black knight swung again. He couldn’t be sure, but he thought he saw more black figures approaching from the hills.

Out of time and out of options, Edwylde took a deep breath, said a silent prayer, and jumped.

 

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Dividing authors

Well, this latest round of attacks in the Amazon/Hachette war has gotten more attention than anything yet. I thought the point of negotiations was to come to some common middle ground in order to get things done. Instead these companies have drawn lines in the sand and refuse to budge, leaving readers and authors in the middle.

One tactic Hachette might use here is to mention all the other online retailers one could use to purchase their books. That ad in the NYT was signed by many Hachette authors, at the end they could have listed all the stores where you can go, besides Amazon. Same in Hachette’s latest email, he could have made a short list of where to get the company’s product. Doing this in each and every public communique might help get the point across that Amazon isn’t the only place to get books.

What bothers me more than anything about this whole situation is how it’s diving authors. Traditional Authors vs. Self-published. I’m seeing it more and more in posts and comments made to the various articles that take one side or the other. It saddens me really, when we’re all just artists trying to find a way to eek out a living doing what we love.

 

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Amazon Prints another Letter

I got an email from Amazon sometime last night. The contents were basically another salvo in their war against Hachette. The letter comes(or seems to come) from Kindle Direct Publishing, via some group called ReadersUnited. By the end of the letter, they want me to email the CEO of Hachette and harass him on their behalf. They even leave his corporate email, which I’m sure he’ll check multiple times each day.  ;/

So much for taking authors out of the middle. Amazon just put theirs up front and center.

The letter is also posted on a website named appropriately enough, Readersunited.com. The entire website is comprised of the letter itself, and some links at the bottom to other articles of the same flavor, i.e. Amazon biased.

I have and still maintain that there’s a place for everyone at this table, but I’m not going to have time to write books if I keep getting dragged into the middle of this publisher squabble. So I say to both parties involved, split the difference and shake hands already!

Below is the letter I received, in it’s entirety. You can also read it at Readersunited.com as well as check out the other articles along this line. I didn’t read those, as I have my own content to create. 😉

 

 

Dear KDP Author,

Just ahead of World War II, there was a radical invention that shook the foundations of book publishing. It was the paperback book. This was a time when movie tickets cost 10 or 20 cents, and books cost $2.50. The new paperback cost 25 cents – it was ten times cheaper. Readers loved the paperback and millions of copies were sold in just the first year.

With it being so inexpensive and with so many more people able to afford to buy and read books, you would think the literary establishment of the day would have celebrated the invention of the paperback, yes? Nope. Instead, they dug in and circled the wagons. They believed low cost paperbacks would destroy literary culture and harm the industry (not to mention their own bank accounts). Many bookstores refused to stock them, and the early paperback publishers had to use unconventional methods of distribution – places like newsstands and drugstores. The famous author George Orwell came out publicly and said about the new paperback format, if “publishers had any sense, they would combine against them and suppress them.” Yes, George Orwell was suggesting collusion.

Well… history doesn’t repeat itself, but it does rhyme.

Fast forward to today, and it’s the e-book’s turn to be opposed by the literary establishment. Amazon and Hachette – a big US publisher and part of a $10 billion media conglomerate – are in the middle of a business dispute about e-books. We want lower e-book prices. Hachette does not. Many e-books are being released at $14.99 and even $19.99. That is unjustifiably high for an e-book. With an e-book, there’s no printing, no over-printing, no need to forecast, no returns, no lost sales due to out of stock, no warehousing costs, no transportation costs, and there is no secondary market – e-books cannot be resold as used books. E-books can and should be less expensive.

Perhaps channeling Orwell’s decades old suggestion, Hachette has already been caught illegally colluding with its competitors to raise e-book prices. So far those parties have paid $166 million in penalties and restitution. Colluding with its competitors to raise prices wasn’t only illegal, it was also highly disrespectful to Hachette’s readers.

The fact is many established incumbents in the industry have taken the position that lower e-book prices will “devalue books” and hurt “Arts and Letters.” They’re wrong. Just as paperbacks did not destroy book culture despite being ten times cheaper, neither will e-books. On the contrary, paperbacks ended up rejuvenating the book industry and making it stronger. The same will happen with e-books.

Many inside the echo-chamber of the industry often draw the box too small. They think books only compete against books. But in reality, books compete against mobile games, television, movies, Facebook, blogs, free news sites and more. If we want a healthy reading culture, we have to work hard to be sure books actually are competitive against these other media types, and a big part of that is working hard to make books less expensive.

Moreover, e-books are highly price elastic. This means that when the price goes down, customers buy much more. We’ve quantified the price elasticity of e-books from repeated measurements across many titles. For every copy an e-book would sell at $14.99, it would sell 1.74 copies if priced at $9.99. So, for example, if customers would buy 100,000 copies of a particular e-book at $14.99, then customers would buy 174,000 copies of that same e-book at $9.99. Total revenue at $14.99 would be $1,499,000. Total revenue at $9.99 is $1,738,000. The important thing to note here is that the lower price is good for all parties involved: the customer is paying 33% less and the author is getting a royalty check 16% larger and being read by an audience that’s 74% larger. The pie is simply bigger.

But when a thing has been done a certain way for a long time, resisting change can be a reflexive instinct, and the powerful interests of the status quo are hard to move. It was never in George Orwell’s interest to suppress paperback books – he was wrong about that.

And despite what some would have you believe, authors are not united on this issue. When the Authors Guild recently wrote on this, they titled their post: “Amazon-Hachette Debate Yields Diverse Opinions Among Authors” (the comments to this post are worth a read).  A petition started by another group of authors and aimed at Hachette, titled “Stop Fighting Low Prices and Fair Wages,” garnered over 7,600 signatures.  And there are myriad articles and posts, by authors and readers alike, supporting us in our effort to keep prices low and build a healthy reading culture. Author David Gaughran’s recent interview is another piece worth reading.

We recognize that writers reasonably want to be left out of a dispute between large companies. Some have suggested that we “just talk.” We tried that. Hachette spent three months stonewalling and only grudgingly began to even acknowledge our concerns when we took action to reduce sales of their titles in our store. Since then Amazon has made three separate offers to Hachette to take authors out of the middle. We first suggested that we (Amazon and Hachette) jointly make author royalties whole during the term of the dispute. Then we suggested that authors receive 100% of all sales of their titles until this dispute is resolved. Then we suggested that we would return to normal business operations if Amazon and Hachette’s normal share of revenue went to a literacy charity. But Hachette, and their parent company Lagardere, have quickly and repeatedly dismissed these offers even though e-books represent 1% of their revenues and they could easily agree to do so. They believe they get leverage from keeping their authors in the middle.

We will never give up our fight for reasonable e-book prices. We know making books more affordable is good for book culture. We’d like your help. Please email Hachette and copy us.

Hachette CEO, Michael Pietsch: Michael.Pietsch@hbgusa.com

Copy us at: readers-united@amazon.com

Please consider including these points:

– We have noted your illegal collusion. Please stop working so hard to overcharge for ebooks. They can and should be less expensive.
– Lowering e-book prices will help – not hurt – the reading culture, just like paperbacks did.
– Stop using your authors as leverage and accept one of Amazon’s offers to take them out of the middle.
– Especially if you’re an author yourself: Remind them that authors are not united on this issue.

Thanks for your support.

The Amazon Books Team

 

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